Today's victim is Does this help? by Hydrochloric Cutie. Which can be found here http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4392096/1/Does_this_Help.
Overview:Harry needs a little help making a decision for the final chaser for Gryffindor's Quidditch team.
My review: It's a Demelza Robbins and Harry Potter pair. So you just know it's a gem. This apparently takes place during book 6 when Harry is captain of the team. They just had tryouts. In order to convince Harry that she needs to be on the team Demelza seduces him. Yeah that's totally realistic. In order for a woman to get what she wants she just needs to sleep with whoever is in charge. This pisses me off. Sex is not supposed to work that way ladies. It just makes you look like a slut. This one gets an F for being unrealistic and a waste of space.
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