Today's atrocity is Spongy Love by Kataang nr.1 fan. It can be found here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7479530/1/Spongy_love
Summary:
Spongebob loves Sandy. At least I think that's what this story is about.
Review:
The grammar and spelling are all over the place. Quotation marks are your friend. Which I don't see any in this story. Capitalization is plus as well. It is very sporadic in this story.
This story is all over the place story wise as well. We go from Spongebob's house to the Krusty Krab to Mrs. Puff's Boating School. We finally end up at Sandy's at the end of the story. Instead of focusing on Sandy and Spongebob relationship the just jump all over the place with no real good transitions.
This story gets in F for horrible spelling and grammar. It was also very sporadic and made no real sense.
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